I finally had a meeting with my advisor to discuss the change of the deliverable. He approved on changing the trailer into an Animatic for the timeline I have. For that meeting I had the first draft of the short film ready to discuss it too.
so I showed him these:
He pointed out that, even though the story is clear, it is somehow linear. To make the film more interesting, it must have ups and downs, when the moment reaches a peak, it must be followed by a resting scene, so the viewer don't expect the next shots.
He gave me some points to think of, and we set a meeting for it next week.
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